The writer's blog : The Writer's Edge http://writersedge.dtoxic.com/The-writer-s-blog-b1.htm Asspiring Writer needs critisism Thu, 11 Mar 2010 21:17:04 GMT 10 The writer's blog : The Writer's Edge http://writersedge.dtoxic.com/The-writer-s-blog-b1.htm In response to: A day in D-tent 1970-01-01T01:00:00Z Sorry I forgot to mention, the incriments were for a vocab assignment, and that explains all the weird words, real people don't use. Sorry. http://writersedge.dtoxic.com/The-writer-s-blog-b1/A-day-in-D-tent-b1-p9.htm#c_1